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Would You Go Back?

WOULD YOU GO BACK?

You have this friend since Junior Secondary School and after Senior

Secondary School both of you lose contact with each other. But she is

someone really special to you, and you're someone very special to her

too.

Five years later you receive a phone call from her.

"Hi, I'll visit you" she says.

"Hi, Sue, when?" you ask her.

"Just wait for me" she replies.

It seems weird but you prepare for her coming anyway.

One rainy night you hear a knock on the door. And you're surprised to

see that it's your friend Sue. Losing touch for ten years is so long

and you start talking about everything. Then both of you even go to your

room upstairs. Suddenly there is a power outage, but the two of you

continue talking by candle light.

Then the phone rings.

"I'll just get the phone downstairs," you say.

"No, don't get it, we're in the middle of our talk," she says.

"It might be important," you say.

"Okay if you say so, but promise me you'll be back," she says.

You promise her a million times that you'll be back. Then you run

downstairs to answer the phone.

"Hello," you say.

"Hello," says the person on the line.

"Yeah?" you say, wondering who it is.

"I'm calling on behalf of Sue's family. They had an accident and her

parents are in the hospital right now," he says.

"How are they?" you ask.

He continues, "They are injured but stable. But I'm sorry to say that

Sue died. We found your name and phone number in Sue's purse, "

His voice trails off as you look up at the long stairs.

[i]WOULD YOU GO BACK AS YOU HAVE PROMISED?

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This sound more like poem than a story,

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Yes, would be sooooo good to Bleep a ghost

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lexi, why u jusy wan form james bond blunt

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Spooky, but i'll go back with a flashlight and a match stick. . .  and the first thing i'll say to her if she's still there is: Sue, they say you're dead!!

If she disappears, i'll know what to do, but if she's still there and i can touch her skin and confirm she's there for real, i would wanna know what the hell is happening!!

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Yea i'll go back!

After grabbing my shotgun or at least a meat cleaver.

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sure i will, to confirm if she's still there, lol

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are u nuts! aint going nowhere.

moreso, this aint romance, move it.

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